This is a flier for you guessed it, the I Heart Graphics Forum. The one on the left is on a grid system and the right is free flowing, like when you get up in the morning.
Some changes would be...
Left: color, do something with the circles.
Right: the red "for", the one that is so noticeable that it makes no sense. Tap, tap the body of text in the red down to its home to be able to right justify a couple of bottom lines.
Some likes...
Left: the layout and type choice.
Right: the image and color
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